Motherless Child

What do you say about a book you have no words for?  Do you call it wonderful?  Do you call it extraordinary?  Or what about phenomenal?  Well, I have to say something right?  It's my job to write a review.  Ms. Valencia your book is wonderful-extraordinary-phenomenal- and any other word that describes perfectly written.

Not only did you tell your story well, you stayed within a timeline that made it easy for any reader to follow without wondering how did I get here.  It flowed and fit like a hand in a glove.  I knew before I asked you to send me your manuscript, it would not disappoint.

Before I rate it though, I'd like to point one thing out to you and your readers.  Without giving away too much, on page 12 you really struck me when you asked (something like) if anyone ever wonder or care about the children of drug addicts.  Well, as a product of drug use, I wondered the same thing as a child.  However, I can boldly say, yes many people do wonder and care.  Often times we do not understand how society can or may turn a blinds eye to the children but many will stop at nothing to help these children like you and me.  You shared that part of your journey when you told about your dear friend Abby.

Another thing to add, I commend your strength.  I have to commend your courage. I know the depths of hell you had to visit in order to bless us with this piece of art.  So many children, I pray, will read "Motherless Child" and see themselves as I have.  They will find the strength they need to live on.  Many adults will read, I hope, and know they aren't the only ones who have struggled or still struggle.  Healing is a process.  As long as you have the courage to seek peace, you will find it.

Oh wow, I can go on all day.  I will not though.  Drum roll please....

I give "Motherless Child"

The Spiritual Battle

Sometimes there is only one word to define something and today for me, the word for Lucretia Shaw Cargill's book, is PHENOMENAL!

Before I continue with my review, I must remind my readers that my reviews are of amateur authors/writers.  I give these new writers a platform that is very rarely provided, especially to thoe who aren't writing erotica.  That's a whole 'nother story in itself.  But, I digress!

Because the message in this book is so darn remarkable, I almost forgot Mrs. Cargill is what we call amateur.  If she's not seasoned in her walk as an author, she is definitely or appears to be seasoned in her faith walk.  She constantly reminds us (the readers) of her experiences of pain, persistence, dedication, and strength while yet reminding us that we wrestle not with flesh and blood.  Therefore, we must cast all of our cares on the one who gives us life.

I enjoyed reading "The Spiritual Battle".  In fact, I enjoyed it so much, I forgot I had more books in Que.  I wanted to read every word from start to finish. I found myself trying to buy time.  I think what resonated with me is her particular style of telling her story.  I'm not sure if she knows it or not but I almost thought I was reading one of the many old school christian books my great grand mother used to have sitting in her living room.  You see, there is no fluff with this book.  There is no new age jargon...just real raw heart wrenching christian emotion. 

Yes, Lucretia took me back to my roots.  What an enjoyable experience.



Drum roll please....

I give "The Spiritual Battle"